I am from
No where
Because where I stand
My destiny is my plan
I look before to look ahead
But dare I dwell in the past
I will stay there
Ever so safe
So I am from
The future
Where fear creeps down your neck
And attempts to disable your feet
The unknown instigates me
Never lets me breath
Somewhere I can't see
But I am from
My mind
Where imagination flourishes with creativity
Moves where I feel I can't reach
Knows nothing, but thinks everything
Confusing but right
Cannot tell if this is the light
Still I am from
The world
we connect through our weakness
Guided by our strength
Do not separate
This is all we have
Going through blinded motions
Waiting for the next revolution
See I am from
The rebellion
Nothing is the same
The meaning is changed
For it is lead to peace
Running with vision
A hope that many
Will not understand
And they will say
I am from
No where
I like how you said I am from the rebellion
ReplyDeleteI love the passion you put into this poem. It really hits home.
ReplyDeleteSarah,
ReplyDelete"Where fear creeps down your neck and attempts to cripple your legs" Amazing! Wonderful job!
I really like your word choice. It makes your poem very unique.
ReplyDeleteIf Kyle was here he'd say your poem is rad... So yeah, your poem is rad, Sarah. Haha.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was well written. My favorite part was my destiny is my plan.
ReplyDeleteYou have a very creative poem. I like the line "the unknown instigates me"
ReplyDeleteInteresting poem it was very good. It's grammar and flow were marvoulous.
ReplyDeleteI like everything about the first and third stanza.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good poem. I like how you said "I am from my mind"
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your poem and thought that the style was interesting.
ReplyDeleteI love the ending and nice rhythm
ReplyDeleteI really liked the lastand the rhyme you often did in the last two lines of each stanza.
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